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I want to be your ocean,
I want to be your tide,
I want to be the moon always
calling you back to my side.

I need to hear your voice,
I need to see your eyes,
I need to feel your arms tight
about me as the world dies.

Leaves fall in the woods,
waves crash onto the sand;
time passes by, but let it pass
as I hold onto your hand.

My soul is whole, stitched back,
my heart is healed by your love.
I'd gladly give my angel wings,
rip them full away - my suicidal glove...

Golden blood split for thee,
tattered feathers softly fall;
tangled moon shards, chemical words,
and yet...love can conquer all.

Let me be your ocean and your tide.
Let me need your arms and eyes.
Let me be whole again...
You are my cursed perfect - surprise.
My soul has been awakened and made whole again. :heart: I love you, my cursed perfect. I dare even call you my soul-mate.

Please, I ask for serious critiques on this work. (But any comments would be amazing.) ^^ Thank you!
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heh, i cant really critique you, since my poetry isnt as good as yours, but i do want to say that i loved this, it was beautiful